"Heart is what drives us and determines our fate."
-Isabel Allende
Amy Goldman Koss said, "Heart is what drives us and determines our fate." This means that what your heart tells you, determines what your fate will be. I agree but not only does your heart determine your fate but your brain also determines the decision you make. This can be clearly seen in Cheat. Your heart does some what determine what your fate will be but also your brain, and then the thoughts that go through your mind, and you always have to think and make sure in what your decision will be.
I clearly understand what you're saying. You need to make sure you have a period on all of your sentences so they don't become a run on sentence. Good job using third person. I don't quiet get if you have three points or not. I suggest you find really good three points that makes people think their heart is fate in making decisions.
ReplyDeleteGood opening of your paragraph Lorena, the way you explain what the quote means and how is used in the book Cheat. I see that you did used 1st person in your paragraph, is good that you used because is were you are giving your own opinion whether you agree or disagree. I see what your 3 main points are and they are really good because you clearly connect them with the book Cheat. Make sure you write the author of the book so other people can check out the book. You did good writing your paragraph but include a little bit more of the book. Maria Hernandez 7th pd
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